I would LOVE your help and thoughts.
What do you like? What don't you like?
Thanks so much for your help, wonderful bloggers!
And the cover is being designed as we speak. Can't wait to show you all!!
OCEAN SLAYS
Sixteen years ago, a girl endured horror-splashed
evil and began a lifetime of ruthless revenge. No matter how many horrendous
men she slays, it doesn’t stop the craving for death, and insanity creeps ever
closer.
Ocean Breeze has spilled more
blood than water held in rivers, but the lives she steals are swamped with
evil. She kills filth to protect the innocent—to shield others from living similar
terrors. However, with each life she snuffs, more darkness enters her soul, and
the voices, the urges, the over-whelming compulsions suck her into lunacy.
Despite being plagued with mutterings of psychopaths, Ocean still hunts, still
searches for her next victim.
Callan Bliss lost his heart
to a vigilante killer. A woman who left him at the scene of a crime and let him
suffer the consequences. Now, he decays in prison, leaving his secret agent
days shattered behind him. No longer able to hunt criminals, he must bunk with
them. He’s bruised and torn. Unable to stop loving Ocean, but unable to forgive
her.
But amongst the darkness there is light. Ocean might not be damned to wallow in whispers of monsters… she has a gift. A blindingly hopeful gift that can right her past and wipe her future clean. As Ocean grows into a woman with more facets than just revenge, she begs Callan to forgive her. She begins the journey to end their heartbreak, but no matter how much she tries, she might not be good enough.
But amongst the darkness there is light. Ocean might not be damned to wallow in whispers of monsters… she has a gift. A blindingly hopeful gift that can right her past and wipe her future clean. As Ocean grows into a woman with more facets than just revenge, she begs Callan to forgive her. She begins the journey to end their heartbreak, but no matter how much she tries, she might not be good enough.
I like the first line! Does she break Callan out of jail though?
ReplyDeleteI really love this blurb you've got posted. It's filled with voice.
ReplyDeleteLove the blurb, can't wait for the cover.
ReplyDeleteUse of "but" a lot - otherwise, it's great! Love the first line :)
ReplyDeleteI love this blurb. Can't wait to get this MS in my inbox. And can't wait to see that cover!!! Shirtless Callan?????
ReplyDeleteI can't wait!
ReplyDeleteI think it will create a little more build if you reorder the first bit of the 2nd paragraph:
Ocean Breeze has spilled more blood than water held in rivers. She kills filth to protect the innocent—to shield others from living similar terrors. However, the lives she steals are swamped with evil, and with each life she snuffs . . .
And, I also vote for shirtless Callan! ;)
Yup. Totally can't wait! :)
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ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read it!!! Sounds so good!
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